Posted by Alison Sigafoos on April 15, 2008 11:08 PM|Permalink
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Super cute. You stick man has much emotion in his face and motion in his body even with his little stick limbs. You use of color enhances the animation, due to the nature of your story line and setting. Even within just a short time, you get across more or less the personalities of these two characters, the smart monkey and the sort of dorky guy. The only thing I would suggest would be changing the words in the voice bubbles to make them easier to read. As it is now, they are quite small.
alison, this is way cute! i loved the style of the drawings and the color you used. i would suggest adding in a couple of more frames between movements, to make them a little smoother, but overall, everything works really well. nice job!
How did you come up with this idea? Brilliant! I liked it a lot. I really liked the color which I think added a lot to it. I loved how you actually had a cutscene after the person got bonked on the head and then showed him sitting up just waiting. I thought it was nice and effective. Only thing as meher said would be to add a couple frames to make it a little more smooth. Other than that I found it nice and clever.
the music works really well with the animation, it sort of sets the mood for your drawings to seem believable. Although, I have just one problem with the water. It looks really flat, which i'm not sure if that your intention or not. but the water marks also seem like funny clouds floating. but other than that I think you did a good job. The monkey angle is really well done and was a good addition to break up the animations look. Also, that is an amazingly convincing drawing of the coca-cola can. It looks so real!
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Comments
Super cute. You stick man has much emotion in his face and motion in his body even with his little stick limbs. You use of color enhances the animation, due to the nature of your story line and setting. Even within just a short time, you get across more or less the personalities of these two characters, the smart monkey and the sort of dorky guy. The only thing I would suggest would be changing the words in the voice bubbles to make them easier to read. As it is now, they are quite small.
Nice animation!
Posted by: Laura | April 16, 2008 04:09 PM
alison, this is way cute! i loved the style of the drawings and the color you used. i would suggest adding in a couple of more frames between movements, to make them a little smoother, but overall, everything works really well. nice job!
Posted by: meher! | April 20, 2008 09:50 PM
How did you come up with this idea? Brilliant! I liked it a lot. I really liked the color which I think added a lot to it. I loved how you actually had a cutscene after the person got bonked on the head and then showed him sitting up just waiting. I thought it was nice and effective. Only thing as meher said would be to add a couple frames to make it a little more smooth. Other than that I found it nice and clever.
Posted by: david | April 22, 2008 03:54 AM
the music works really well with the animation, it sort of sets the mood for your drawings to seem believable. Although, I have just one problem with the water. It looks really flat, which i'm not sure if that your intention or not. but the water marks also seem like funny clouds floating. but other than that I think you did a good job. The monkey angle is really well done and was a good addition to break up the animations look. Also, that is an amazingly convincing drawing of the coca-cola can. It looks so real!
Posted by: Matt W | April 22, 2008 08:05 PM