Posted by besto038 on April 15, 2008 11:08 PM|Permalink
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WHITNEYYYYYY. Okees! So I know you weren't entirely happy with this animation, but I thought it was a really clean, and simple animation. I really enjoyed the randomness (if thats a word) in it. Like, you have this guy...sucking at hurdling and then a black screen...and then some guy dancing? ...Maybe thats my kind of humor, but it was awesome! (I showed some of my friends and they really liked it too). Some things to think about would be to actually make him fall on the ground at some point and like Heba said before, don't have the title because it does distract from the awesome stick figure you drew! ...good jobskis!
I love your animation :) I like how you go from world's worst hurdler to a guy dancing. The two random people in the animation work well. For the title at the beginning, maybe just introduce it and then fade out and show the sequence of the hurdler. Just a couple things that would be cool, and that would be to maybe add a background in the hurdler sequence and also maybe change up a different fall every time the hurdler trips over the hurdle. The guy dancing sequence is absolutely hilarious and it reminds me of the commercial where the guy just gets up and starts dancing in the waiting room. I think it could be cool if you added a rotating disco ball above the dancer. I love the music you chose and it works well with your animation. It is entertaining, humorous and simple. Good Job! :)
Your animation is really fluid, especially the hurdler. The loop works seamlessly and the content is funny/ totally random in a good way. I enjoy the cut to the guy dancing. What the hell? Very funny.
Your animation is really fluid, especially the hurdler. The loop works seamlessly and the content is funny/ totally random in a good way. I enjoy the cut to the guy dancing. What the hell? Very funny.
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WHITNEYYYYYY. Okees! So I know you weren't entirely happy with this animation, but I thought it was a really clean, and simple animation. I really enjoyed the randomness (if thats a word) in it. Like, you have this guy...sucking at hurdling and then a black screen...and then some guy dancing? ...Maybe thats my kind of humor, but it was awesome! (I showed some of my friends and they really liked it too). Some things to think about would be to actually make him fall on the ground at some point and like Heba said before, don't have the title because it does distract from the awesome stick figure you drew! ...good jobskis!
Posted by: Natalie | April 16, 2008 09:00 PM
I love your animation :) I like how you go from world's worst hurdler to a guy dancing. The two random people in the animation work well. For the title at the beginning, maybe just introduce it and then fade out and show the sequence of the hurdler. Just a couple things that would be cool, and that would be to maybe add a background in the hurdler sequence and also maybe change up a different fall every time the hurdler trips over the hurdle. The guy dancing sequence is absolutely hilarious and it reminds me of the commercial where the guy just gets up and starts dancing in the waiting room. I think it could be cool if you added a rotating disco ball above the dancer. I love the music you chose and it works well with your animation. It is entertaining, humorous and simple. Good Job! :)
Posted by: Micki | April 16, 2008 09:32 PM
Your animation is really fluid, especially the hurdler. The loop works seamlessly and the content is funny/ totally random in a good way. I enjoy the cut to the guy dancing. What the hell? Very funny.
Posted by: Emily Graupner | April 21, 2008 11:08 PM
Your animation is really fluid, especially the hurdler. The loop works seamlessly and the content is funny/ totally random in a good way. I enjoy the cut to the guy dancing. What the hell? Very funny.
Posted by: Emily Graupner | April 21, 2008 11:08 PM