Posted by rausc080 on April 15, 2008 11:14 PM|Permalink
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I like this animation a lot. The shapes and lines move and morph very fluidly. The music is a great addition; it wouldn't be as effective without it. I think we went over some of this in class, but just making the "Save the Trees" easier to read. Also it might help to make the animation more clear on the screen.
Hey David! Nice job, I'm jealous of how smoothly you were able to animated the "melting" of the tree. I also love music choice. I agree with Laura that the sign he is holding is a little hard to read, but overall good work! :)
hi david! i liked that your animation had a simple concept. the only thing i would change is perhaps making your lines a little darker, and of course, making the sign he's holding either a little bigger or easier to read. the music was done really well! it went nicely in time with the animation, and faded out perfectly at the end. good job!
I think you did a great job on this. I especially like the subtle motion of the beard turning into the tree top. All of your movements are really well developed and it has a nice beginning and ending scenario. The only thing I can suggest to change is to make the entire animation larger.
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Comments
I like this animation a lot. The shapes and lines move and morph very fluidly. The music is a great addition; it wouldn't be as effective without it. I think we went over some of this in class, but just making the "Save the Trees" easier to read. Also it might help to make the animation more clear on the screen.
Nice job, David!
Posted by: Anonymous | April 16, 2008 04:16 PM
Oops, that was me, Laura...posted as "Anonymous"
Posted by: Laura | April 16, 2008 04:17 PM
Hey David! Nice job, I'm jealous of how smoothly you were able to animated the "melting" of the tree. I also love music choice. I agree with Laura that the sign he is holding is a little hard to read, but overall good work! :)
Posted by: Alison Sigafoos | April 17, 2008 06:03 AM
hi david! i liked that your animation had a simple concept. the only thing i would change is perhaps making your lines a little darker, and of course, making the sign he's holding either a little bigger or easier to read. the music was done really well! it went nicely in time with the animation, and faded out perfectly at the end. good job!
Posted by: meher | April 20, 2008 09:26 PM
I think you did a great job on this. I especially like the subtle motion of the beard turning into the tree top. All of your movements are really well developed and it has a nice beginning and ending scenario. The only thing I can suggest to change is to make the entire animation larger.
Posted by: Matt W | April 22, 2008 07:51 PM