Posted by helga011 on April 21, 2008 10:32 PM|Permalink
Comments
Magnus -
I really liked this concept from the get go and you did a great job of pulling it off. The animations are subtle enough to get the point across, and all of them work well.
Like others said in class, I really think adding sound would take it to the next level. Even just sounds for the wooshing part would make it way cooler.
Magnus, I like your characters and the concept. At first the swooshing part confused me but after the first time I realized what it was and it worked really well. I think maybe having the characters show through the lines or even just sound would help clear what was going on. I like the style a lot though and the smoothness of the animation, nice job!
Hey Magnus,
I love the concept of your animation. When I first saw it I was confused on what was going on, but I definitely got it the second time around. I guess the only thing that might help others understand it would be to slow down the parts where the ninja travels, I mean just a smidge bit, but thats kind of the only thing i've got. I think its totally you and I like it.
Hey Magnus,
I love the concept of your animation. When I first saw it I was confused on what was going on, but I definitely got it the second time around. I guess the only thing that might help others understand it would be to slow down the parts where the ninja travels, I mean just a smidge bit, but thats kind of the only thing i've got. I think its totally you and I like it.
Really I think he has a lot of action-the swoosh lines were effective in showing movement.
If the transitions were smoother, I think the story line would be clearer.
I think it looks good looped.
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Comments
Magnus -
I really liked this concept from the get go and you did a great job of pulling it off. The animations are subtle enough to get the point across, and all of them work well.
Like others said in class, I really think adding sound would take it to the next level. Even just sounds for the wooshing part would make it way cooler.
Posted by: Paul Carroll | April 22, 2008 01:53 AM
Magnus, I like your characters and the concept. At first the swooshing part confused me but after the first time I realized what it was and it worked really well. I think maybe having the characters show through the lines or even just sound would help clear what was going on. I like the style a lot though and the smoothness of the animation, nice job!
Posted by: Nicole Shupien | April 22, 2008 03:58 AM
Hey Magnus,
I love the concept of your animation. When I first saw it I was confused on what was going on, but I definitely got it the second time around. I guess the only thing that might help others understand it would be to slow down the parts where the ninja travels, I mean just a smidge bit, but thats kind of the only thing i've got. I think its totally you and I like it.
Posted by: Clarissa Kramer | April 22, 2008 04:17 AM
Hey Magnus,
I love the concept of your animation. When I first saw it I was confused on what was going on, but I definitely got it the second time around. I guess the only thing that might help others understand it would be to slow down the parts where the ninja travels, I mean just a smidge bit, but thats kind of the only thing i've got. I think its totally you and I like it.
Posted by: Clarissa Kramer | April 22, 2008 04:17 AM
I like the ninja character. He's emotive
Really I think he has a lot of action-the swoosh lines were effective in showing movement.
If the transitions were smoother, I think the story line would be clearer.
I think it looks good looped.
Posted by: kaitlin | April 27, 2008 01:58 AM