I edited my animation by extending the waiting period. hope you all enjoy :)
Posted by benso587 on April 16, 2008 07:15 AM|Permalink
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Heyo! So I really liked your animation and how simplified it was. There's a couple things I have to say about it. Like Heba mentioned, I think you should have a longer period where the dog is waiting. This would definitely create an anticipating factor to your animation! Also, I thought the moon/sun was a ball being thrown outside until I watched it a couple times. This could easily be fixed by adding a few sun rays, or something!? Just a couple ideas! Otherwise good job on your first animation! (oh..and the music definitely added to the mood of the animation!)
Hey! i noticed that you added the extra time for the waiting period. I think that really helps build anticipation! However, I do think that instead of just having one still the entire time maybe throwing in a tail wag or two may make that time a little more interesting?? but overall, I think adding in that extra time really helps! The only other thing was like Natalie said, with the sun. I did catch on that it was the sun right away but it goes by so fast which maybe you could also include in the long still to make the day seem longer. But otherwise-- Nice job!
Cute animation! I agree with Whitney, an extra tail wag while the dog is waiting would be nice. The music is a nice touch to the animation- it really helps portray what the dog is feeling. It's cute because the music is so dramatic, but the content is sort of silly.
Cute animation! I agree with Whitney, an extra tail wag while the dog is waiting would be nice. The music is a nice touch to the animation- it really helps portray what the dog is feeling. It's cute because the music is so dramatic, but the content is sort of silly.
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Comments
Heyo! So I really liked your animation and how simplified it was. There's a couple things I have to say about it. Like Heba mentioned, I think you should have a longer period where the dog is waiting. This would definitely create an anticipating factor to your animation! Also, I thought the moon/sun was a ball being thrown outside until I watched it a couple times. This could easily be fixed by adding a few sun rays, or something!? Just a couple ideas! Otherwise good job on your first animation! (oh..and the music definitely added to the mood of the animation!)
Posted by: Natalie | April 16, 2008 08:57 PM
Hey! i noticed that you added the extra time for the waiting period. I think that really helps build anticipation! However, I do think that instead of just having one still the entire time maybe throwing in a tail wag or two may make that time a little more interesting?? but overall, I think adding in that extra time really helps! The only other thing was like Natalie said, with the sun. I did catch on that it was the sun right away but it goes by so fast which maybe you could also include in the long still to make the day seem longer. But otherwise-- Nice job!
Posted by: Whitney Bestor | April 21, 2008 05:24 AM
Cute animation! I agree with Whitney, an extra tail wag while the dog is waiting would be nice. The music is a nice touch to the animation- it really helps portray what the dog is feeling. It's cute because the music is so dramatic, but the content is sort of silly.
Posted by: Emily Graupner | April 21, 2008 05:50 AM
Cute animation! I agree with Whitney, an extra tail wag while the dog is waiting would be nice. The music is a nice touch to the animation- it really helps portray what the dog is feeling. It's cute because the music is so dramatic, but the content is sort of silly.
Posted by: Emily Graupner | April 21, 2008 05:51 AM