Posted by olbra002 on April 16, 2008 03:16 AM|Permalink
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The sound choice for the animation works perfectly. The one thing about the beginning of your animation, is that the shark shows up too quick and the suspense of him creeping up from behind the swimmer isn't as effective. Heba mentioned that it would be good to take out the shark and let the swimmer swim for a little bit. The movement of the wave lines work well to create the sense that the swimmer is in water. The shark eating sequence is done very well too. Just some ideas :) I really enjoyed yours and thanks for the tips! :)
Hey. I really enjoyed your animation. I thought it was really funny how mr. mustache was wearing water wings to help him float yet he was still just underneath the surface of the water!! hehe! I do agree that you could have let mr. mustache swim for a few seconds without the shark but I think overall your animation was a success! Even though I know its just because of the sound effects, the only other criticism would be the extra time at the end.
Adding a little splash of color was really effective in your animation. especially because it makes the blood seem a little more disturbing at the end. You did a really nice job with the sound effects! So effective and it makes the animation even more humorous. Adding a little more time without the shark would be nice, because we see that he's in a pickle right away. The extra time with him swimming alone would make the overall effect a little more dramatic/ surprising. Nice job!
Also, I love the mustache
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Comments
The sound choice for the animation works perfectly. The one thing about the beginning of your animation, is that the shark shows up too quick and the suspense of him creeping up from behind the swimmer isn't as effective. Heba mentioned that it would be good to take out the shark and let the swimmer swim for a little bit. The movement of the wave lines work well to create the sense that the swimmer is in water. The shark eating sequence is done very well too. Just some ideas :) I really enjoyed yours and thanks for the tips! :)
Posted by: Micki | April 16, 2008 09:20 PM
Hey. I really enjoyed your animation. I thought it was really funny how mr. mustache was wearing water wings to help him float yet he was still just underneath the surface of the water!! hehe! I do agree that you could have let mr. mustache swim for a few seconds without the shark but I think overall your animation was a success! Even though I know its just because of the sound effects, the only other criticism would be the extra time at the end.
Posted by: Whitney Bestor | April 21, 2008 05:29 AM
Adding a little splash of color was really effective in your animation. especially because it makes the blood seem a little more disturbing at the end. You did a really nice job with the sound effects! So effective and it makes the animation even more humorous. Adding a little more time without the shark would be nice, because we see that he's in a pickle right away. The extra time with him swimming alone would make the overall effect a little more dramatic/ surprising. Nice job!
Also, I love the mustache
Posted by: Anonymous | April 21, 2008 05:56 AM