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Posted by krame215 on April 20, 2008 9:38 PM | Permalink
I think your animation turned out really well. The use of color was definitely a nice touch and really pushed it to the next level.
One thing that could be tweaked is the intro text. It seems to hang there for a few seconds too long. Other than that I think your animation was successful.
Paul Carroll |
April 20, 2008 10:49 PM
I'm glad you used color-way to go.
The end sprinkles are a bit awkward to me. They just hang out, and I want them to disappear each time I watch it. The intro is too long, but you knew that already. I also think that it could use more animation before the transformation. Like head tilts, or something. Besides that it is very charming. I love french. and cupcakes.
April 21, 2008 2:13 AM
I also really like your use of color and the way the transformation happens really quickly. Since I knew it was going to happen, I really like the suspense before he changed to a cupcake.
Adding to Kaitlin's comment about more animation before the transformation, I can see the chef winking or something like that. Since the cupcake drawing is so cute and colorful, I think it would have been nice to just end with that image instead of having the sprinkles. Nice job, it's one of my favorites!
Nicole Shupien |
April 21, 2008 4:15 AM
Your animation turned out great. Your animation was a basic transformation, so the use of color jazzed it up a bit, I should think.
magnus helgason |
April 22, 2008 2:59 PM