US says China to allow activist to leave - al Jezeera
By Andrew Beck
This article did a good job at getting quotes from the necessary groups. They contacted both Chinese and American diplomats and the activist. It would have been nice to have a quote from Hilary Clinton, because it is her plane that is centered at the man leaving the country.
The article also fails to mention why the activist is having trouble leaving the country and what he is an activist for. There must be some reason for why he was not being allowed to leave.
Lastly, the article flowed very nicely. It begins with the breaking information then goes to how the Chinese government feels about the situation and finishes with more information on the activist and his relations with the US.