Paris building collapse kills child, 6, in Pierrefitte - BBC
Analysed by Andrew Beck
The article uses passive voice when describing the situation. This could have been avoided to make the article more direct. Additionally, there are no quotes from anyone that was there. It only includes a small statement from the governor of the region. It would have nice to include some more information about the church and area where the church was at to give a little background information.
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