May 3, 2007

WalMart

By Natalie Bervig

The small town of Park Rapids, Minn. will soon be the home of a Super WalMart leaving some downtown business owners worried about a decline in sales.
The store, which has generated sometimes-heated discussion at City Council meetings since last November, will hold its grand opening on Wednesday, March 14.
Most businesses in Park Rapids are locally owned and operated and owners worry that they will not be able to compete with WalMart’s low prices and will lose their regular customers.
Mayor Nancy Carroll explained that cities have developmental tools at their disposal such as tax breaks, or offers to pay for sewer and water in efforts to bring in businesses like WalMart to their town.
“Here in Park Rapids we did not do anything, but WalMart still wanted to come,� Carroll said.
Although owners are concerned about losing business, many of them are members of the Park Rapids Business Association, which will work to plan events and activities to draw people to shop downtown.
Carroll is looking at the positives.
“People from Park Rapids used to have to drive to Bemidji, Minn. to go to WalMart. I hope that having a WalMart in town will at least keep home shoppers at home, and maybe bring people from other small towns to shop and while they are here, maybe they will stop at our liquor store too.�
WalMart will open for business Wednesday.

Growing up in the small town of Park Rapids the addition of a WalMart is a very big deal to our community. A majority of our businesses are locally owned and operated and so there is a fear in many residents that the WalMart is going to put our grocery stores, hardware stores etc out of business. Unless you come from a community like this I think it is hard to understand just how much of an impact it will have on the economy of small town. I guess I wanted to see what people felt about the new arrival, and what they wanted to do about it. To get my information I walked around downtown and talked to business owners. I also called up the mayor and she willingly spoke with me. I was only there for a weekend and so I did not get as much information as I would have liked. I didn't recieve some emails from members of the downtown business association until after the story was due. If I would have been in Park Rapids the whole time I think I would have gotten much more detail and better information. I think my biggest challenge in writing this story was trying to get a message out to the audience I would have been writing for. When we looked at my story in class everyone seemed to think it was funny. Like I said before, it is hard for people to understand that a WalMart coming to a town with a population of 3000 is a pretty big deal unless they are familiar with a town of that size. It is going to change people's lives. So I was challenged in writing the story because I was writing it through the eyes of people who live in Park Rapids, while people who read it here didn't fully understand it. I think some pictures of the store and of the ribbon cutting ceremony would have been an addition to this story. I also think taking pictures of the locally owned stores downtown would have been a way to personalize the story and tell it from the view of the owners. I would have really liked to have more time to sit and talk with them and get a better vision of how the new WalMart will affect their business, and therefore their lives. Even audio interviews would be helpful to be able to show the emotion in people's voice when they talk about this stuff. You can hear in someones voice when they are concerned or passionate etc. I also would have liked to talk with some of the people who live in the city that come to Park Rapids every summer. Since we are not on peak tourist time, there were none around, but last summer when I heard people who were staying at their lake homes talking about it, they were very unhappy about the idea of a WalMart coming to Park Rapids. I think that they would have added an interesting angle to the story.

April 4, 2007

St. Paul Police name 'Person of Interest' in Triple Homicide

By Natalie Bervig

Police announced today that Tyvarus Lindsey, 25, is one of three people that have been connected with the triple homicide in the North End.

Although two others have been said to be connected, their names have not been released.

There is not enough evidence to consider any of the three suspects yet, but police have said there is reason to investigate.

Lindsey has an elaborate criminal record involving drugs and theft and was released in November after a prosecutor’s error on a federal gun possession charge.

Lindsey is also tied to a shooting early last month at Costello’s bar in the Cathedral Hill area but police spokesman Tom Walsh said charges in that case are probably not going to go through as the victim is not cooperating.

I feel like this story was a bit unclear in both papers. They both had titles about linking a person to a triple homicide, but did not really give out any information. Instead, they refered to all of his past convictions and charges, but it left me confused as to where the present case actually stood.

http://www.startribune.com/467/story/1098095.html

http://www.twincities.com/allheadlines/ci_5584399

March 29, 2007

Minnesota Man Killed in Iraq

By Natalie Bervig

Former Minnesota man Spc. Sean K. Mcdonald, 21, died Sunday after a bomb exploded near his vehicle in Baghdad.

Although he only lived in Rosemount for a couple years, his sister Jessica said he planned to return here after his duty was finished next year.

McDonald is the 55th person with connections to Minnesota that has died due to the war in Iraq and Afghanistan.


I found it to be very interesting that the Pioneer Press was not able get in contact with the family for information and kept thier story strictly to the facts - http://www.twincities.com/localnews/ci_5543700 - when the Star Tribune did a very lengthy story after talking with the sister of the victim. One paper must have been more persistant! http://www.startribune.com/722/story/1087771.html

March 20, 2007

Minnesota Teen Shot In Florida Hotel

By Natalie Bervig

18-year-old Lance D. Ulland, of Austin, Minn., was shot and killed early Sunday morning in his hotel room in Daytona Beach, Fla.

Police say that Ulland had been visiting Daytona Beach over spring break with his mother as they were looking into moving there. Two of Ulland's cousins were staying at the Economy Inn and invited him to stay.

The three of them, along with another man and woman were in there room drinking when they heard a knock at their door, police said. When Ulland opened the door, he was shot and killed.

The suspect, Matthew A. Castro, 27, of Jacksonville, Fla., told police that Ulland had been involved in a drug deal gone wrong.

Police are suspicious and are still looking for a motive.


The Tribune mentioned a little about Ulland and his life at home, http://www.startribune.com/462/story/1065082.html
but the pioneer press said more and described how he didn't have a record which made the shooting even more suspicious.http://www.twincities.com/mld/twincities/news/local/16936612.htm

March 8, 2007

Landfall Hero

By Natalie Bervig

LANDFALL - A man who saved his daughter from a burning mobile home this morning in Landfall is now being called a hero.

The man, along with his wife and son did not survive.

The brother of the man, who had been staying overnight, along with the daughter are currently being treated at Regions Hospital in St. Paul.

The names of the victims have not been released.

The state Fire Marshall is investigating the cause of the fire that took place in the 300 block of North Dellwood Square in the Landfall Mobile Home Park. There is no evidence of arson or foul play.

This is the second of two fires in the area within the past few months.

The star Tribune went more in depth with their reporting by getting multiple accounts from witnesses which were helpful to illustrate the story. http://www.startribune.com/462/story/1040468.html

The Pioneer press had a shorter story with less detail. http://www.twincities.com/mld/twincities/16860030.htm

March 6, 2007

Warning: Sleeping on Planes May Be Dangerous

By Natalie Bervig

MINNEAPOLIS - A flight from Seattle to Minneapolis turned ugly for a female passenger Monday night.

Smauel Oscar Gonzalez is charged with simple assalt after allegedly touching a femal passenger while she was asleep and ejaculating on her.

The criminal complaint says that the woman felt Gonzalez touching her and moving her shirt upwards and then he got up and moved to another seat. The complaint also states that when she went to fix her shirt she found semen and immediately notified a flight attendant.

Gonzalez is an employee of Northwest Airlines and works in the Seattle-Tacoma International Airport's fleet services division.

Gonzalez appeared in court on Monday night and is being held in the Sherburne County Jail.

The two papers covered the story in a very similar way. I did feel like the pioneer press, http://www.twincities.com/mld/twincities/16840595.htm, went into a bit more detail. The Star Tribune, http://www.startribune.com/467/story/1034178.html, also added something that the Pioneer press did not. This was the risk of a sexually transmitted disease being passed on to the victim.

March 5, 2007

Werewolf Under the Full Moon

By Natalie Bervig

FOND DU LAC, Wis. - Robert Marsh, a 39-year-old male, told police he was a werewolf that was capable of changing shapes after breaking into a woman's apartment Thursday.

Marsh, a former inmate, was staying at the apartment, but forced his way in around 3 a.m. Thursday the woman said.

The complaint says that Marsh had been drinking heavily, and was in possesion of marijauna.

Marsh is scheduled to appear in cout on March 14. Bail is set at $5,000.

Both the Star Tribune, http://www.startribune.com/484/story/1033096.html, and the Pioneer Press, http://www.twincities.com:80/mld/twincities/16839167.htm, used the Associated Press version of the story. MyFox Wisonsin also used the AP story. http://www.myfoxmilwaukee.com/myfox/pages/News/Detail?contentId=2575029&version=2&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=TSTY&pageId=3.2.1

March 3, 2007

Attack of the Vulcans

By Natalie Bervig

ST. PAUL - Another bartender is suing the producers of the St. Paul Winter Carnival and eight members of the Vulcans of the 2005 Krewe.

The suit, which was filed in Dakota Country last week, claims that the plaintiff, who was 19 at the time, was fondled and groped in a ritual performed by eight of the Vulcans.

The suit also says that the woman was told to keep the information secret and not tell the police about the incident.

This suit is not the only one that has been filed against the defendants. Two other women filed suit in October of 2005.


The Star Tribune did not describe teh actual incident in very much detail. It stuck mostly to the facts and the suit. http://www.startribune.com/462/story/1032381.html

The pioneer press, on the other hand, described the act pretty graphically and really made the defendants look bad.http://www.twincities.com/mld/twincities/news/local/16814391.htm

March 1, 2007

Rape Claims Proven False

By Natalie Bervig

ST. PAUL - Answers to the investigation of an alleged rape that took place last October in St. Paul have now been found.

Police say that the sex between the 40-year-old woman and alleged attacked was consensual.

After months of investigation police found evidence of internet conversations and other documentation that proved the allegations to be false.

The woman will be investigated for filing a false report and obstrucing the legal process. A case against the woman will be sent to the St. Paul City Attorney's office in the next couple of weeks.

Both the Star Tribune and the Pioneer Press covered the story. The Pioneer Press went more in depth with the story as they talked about the details of the initial rape allegation.

February 26, 2007

Trooper Avoids Injury

By Natalie Bervig

WILLMAR - A state trooper escaped injury Monday when another vehicle ran into his squad car.

The trooper had been assisting a driver who had gone into the ditch on Highway 71 south of Willmar when another car slipped on the ice and crashed into the other car, causing it to hit the squad car as well.

The trooper was not in his car and was not hurt. The 37-year-old Willmar woman who ran into the cars was treated for minor injuries.

I didn't realize until just now that the stories are identical because they were both Associated press stories. The only difference is that the Star Tribune mentions the time of the accident. http://www.startribune.com/462/story/1026522.html The Pioneer Press does not. http://www.twincities.com/mld/twincities/16788417.htm

February 21, 2007

Uptown Shooting

By Natalie Bervig

MINNEAPOLIS – 18-year-old Billy Ray Deshawn Johnson pleaded guilty for second degree murder Wednesday. This plea will allow Johnson to get out of a possible life sentence, with a max of 30 years in prison.

Johnson is charged with the murder of 25-year-old Mechael Zebuhr.

Zebuhr had been visiting his sister here last March when he and his mother were robbed in Uptown after leaving a restaurant. Johnson shot Zebuhr in the head and he died two days later in the hospital.

The pioneer press story took a more personal side as they gave many details and also mentioned at the end that Johnson was crying when he appeared in court today. http://www.twincities.com/mld/twincities/16749004.htm

The Tribune stayed with the facts of the story, and also mentioned the sentencing of the two other people involved in the robbery. http://www.startribune.com/462/story/1016199.html

February 20, 2007

Not So Lucky

By Natalie Bervig

LUCK, WI - The body of Jason D. Madsen a 33 year-old resident of Luck, WIsconsin, was found early Saturday morning. Wisconsin police had followed a trail of blood to find the body after recieving a phone call from Madsen's girlfriend indicating he was missing.

Madsen had been at the Suzy Q Bar on Friday evening with his next door neighbor Timothy M. Lehman. People there reported Madsen had been bragging about beating Lehman in a game of poker.

Lehman is now charged with first degree intentional homicide.

The Star Tribune's account of the crime is very extensive. They go in depth as to how they found the body, and also their questioning of Lehman. They also say they are unsure of a motive. http://www.startribune.com/467/story/1012527.html

The Pioneer Press has a much shorter story with little detail. They also state matter of factly that the motive of the murder is based on the fact Lehman owed Madsen money. http://www.twincities.com/mld/twincities/16734997.htm

February 13, 2007

Car Chase

A man was killed today after a car chase in St. Paul. Mitchell Moua was wanted for aggravated assault and false imprisonment. There was also an outstanding federal warrant for a weapons violation.

St. Paul police had been tipped off as to his whereabouts this morning and confronted him near Ross Avenue. At this point Moua pointed a gun at himself and took off. There were two other passengers in the car when the chase began, but Moua told them to get out.

The chase ended when Moua crashed into other vehicles. He fired at police and they fired back. He was shot and died at Regions Hospital just hours later.

The Star Tribune seemed to have a little bit different twist to their story. They commented that Moua could have in fact shot himself, and the bullets of the policemen might not have killed him. http://www.startribune.com/467/story/997481.html

THe pioneer press on the other hand uses the headline to point out that the policemen killed the man. http://www.twincities.com/mld/twincities/16682179.htm