I like this paper by Daniele. I like the first part, when she set the reader up for what she is going to tell us. The paper had a nice flow to it, and easy to read. The organization was very clear for me. The style from each paragraphs was ok.
I understand what she was saying. I also like how she pick a subject that other people can relate to. I know that happen to me too. Sometime time it seen, whenever I have a hard teacher, those are the ones that I learn so much from. You get pround for youself when you do well in a hard class like that.