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March 12, 2007

Flash Fiction Number 13 - Malicioius Intentions

Malicious Intentions

He got away with it! The boss dismissed Stacy’s feelings that Brian had purposefully lied about her project, for whatever reason.
The motive she thought, although she couldn’t prove anything, was that just by being there Stacy threatened Brian’s sandbox.
Once out of the boss’ hearing range Brian turned to her with a smirk, “You should have stayed in bed today Stacy, this is my World.?
She just stared while he strutted off.
She didn’t know what was worse, snakes like him or a boss who couldn’t see through them. But now she had no doubts about his malicious intentions.

Posted by carl1236 at March 12, 2007 6:45 PM | Writing


Nice and concise, the story follows the classic flash fiction form of the setup, the buildup and the payoff. Nice work.

Posted by: Guy Hogan at March 13, 2007 8:55 PM

Thank you Guy.

Posted by: John at March 14, 2007 6:24 AM