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December 2, 2007

Computer Assisted Reporting

This is the final focus assignment. I'm very happy about that. It's about computer assisted reporting. I retrieved the article from the NICAR.ORG website. It's a computer-assisted report from KHOU in Texas about robberies at ATMs. It's a pretty good subject to cover. You don't often here about these robberies, or at least you don't read about them. It uses computers to chart the areas where these crimes occurred. It then goes into detail about laws that supposedly protect customers at outside ATMs, but usually just protect banks from liability. Although this subject doesn't especially interest me, it's done well; informative with relevant and useful information.

I'm not sure of the role that computers played. They used it to electronically chart the locations of each robbery. They really didn't have that many locations, this could have easily been done by hand. It's not a bad thing that they used computers, it just wasn't especially relevant.

Whoa. I just listened to the broadcast. The editing is really weird. The narration cuts into the quotes super close like, ..."driving in his car." "On my way to work." Brian Erickson had a the "scared, for 200$." ANyway, super weird.

November 11, 2007

Shooting in North- Diversity Blog

Once again there's been a shooting in North Minneapolis. It happened at a birthday party for a 21-year-old. An 18-year-old was killed and another man was injured. It's a shame and tragedy. (I'm guessing that Nick Coleman is going to write a story about it.) The Star Tribune covered it like it was an action film. The Pi Press gave it a brief mention, merely numbers of dead and wounded from the police report.

Although Minneapolitans might congratulate themselves on how progressive they are, the fact is that much like there are two Americas, North and South (and Texas), there are two Minneapolis' (and Minneapolis, Kansas). It's commonly listed in the top five most segregated cities in the country, people in South might not see evidence of this, but, North is the reason.

I used to live in North Minneapolis. Albeit in the only house of white people on the block, but it was a whole different world as far as infrastructure that exists (no grocery stores, no clubs, no bars, etc.). There are some youth centers and some highly-trafficked liquor stores. But, all in all, there's nothing to do. In my limited experience I would think that if there was something to do, you wouldn't so often get these kids killing each other or bystanders. In this case it was an 18-year-old and a 21-year-old. But this observation isn't usually reflected in city policy which, apart from some limited economic development, mostly ignores North. And the stories that cover crime never touch on it.

I looked into the racial disparity in the newsrooms of the local papers, from 2002 stats it looks like they've almost doubled in the previous ten years. Respectively, from 7% to 14% and 12% to 18%. I think in this case though it's less of an easy subject to slide into the generic "people of color" label. That, obviously, reflects many different ethnicities and experiences, including, the very valid one of economy and education. Obviously there's little to do about the education, someone without a high school diploma probably can't write up to level for a metropolitan newspaper. But, something I've spoken with my roommate about, who is a producer at MPR, is that so many people in the media come down the same career path. Pretty nice high school and privileged background, to a nice college, maybe grad school, and then straight into the media world of internships and careers. Not to say that it's an easy path necessarily. But how does it skew the perceptions of the reporters?

Sometimes from this crime in North articles I get the feeling that I'm reading the same story time and again. When crime happens in other areas, more context is provided, more sympathy is shown to the victims and their families. Is this relevant to the background of the reporters and editors?

This isn't only relevant to crime in high-poverty areas.How does someone in a skilled white collar career like journalism relate to no-collar or blue-collar workers in a labor dispute? How does someone who never interacts with illegal immigrants cover their stories? Or minimum-wage workers for people who've never struggled except with student loans? Barbara Ehrenriech addressed some of these issues years back, but it was controversial in educated circles who said she was just playing and not really living the true situation of working-class in America. So are those the options, go live forever as a working-class person, or just give up (and maybe pretend that working people don't really exist?)? Obviously not. But, there's no easy answer, just a dialog.

November 4, 2007

Blog on Numbers- Americans not yet ready for Bush 2008

The Washington Post just contained a super-number-centric articles about how Americans want change. It's certainly a broad subject, how do you really embody that in a poll? They focus on political change, that people are unhappy with Bush, across political lines even. It also brings in how people are disappointed with the Democrat(ic) congress and the progress in the War in Iraq. All told it's a lot of numbers to squeeze into one story. It spends the first half page of this story on numbers that relate to dissatisfaction and then ties it into the current primary elections, suggesting that citizens might be dissatisfied with Washington overall, or with politics.

To back up these numbers the writer uses comments from citizens based on their political positions. It gives a face to the numbers and helps explain what lies behind them emotionally, I guess the why of them. The third page provides perspectives of political insiders and pundits to try and explain the numbers behind the presidential approval ratings.

October 28, 2007

Obituary of Paul Fox

The Guardian in London published an obituary of second-wave punk guitarist Paul Fox. He died of cancer at 56.

It has a standard obituary lead, givng his name, age, cause of death, and the reason he is known. It works because the writer then veers into biography.

It doesn't really list any sources. None of the information, much of it biographical or listings of the bands he had worked with, is attributed. I looked up the author, Peter Mason, and found that he has written a book about calypso but nothing about punk. I can only speculate that much of this information is contained in musical reference books.At the bottom however there's information about survivors including an ex-wife who it says he had reconciled with. Maybe the information came from her, unless the writers was a friend of the deceased.

Obituaries differ from resumes because they contain sometimes critical information.For instance, this talks about the problems he had with heroin and the bad sales of his records.

October 21, 2007

City Council Meeting in NYC- Focus Topic

I accidentally did the event coverage blog last week so this week I'm doing the press conference. I used google news to find an event. It's a city council meeting about a violent incident between and student and principal. The notes for it are

October 14, 2007

Renaissance Festival in Conner Prairie, Indiana- Event

The INdy Star of Indiana reported last week on the the third annual Renaissance festival, which was held in Conner Prairie last weekend. This was its first year in a new location. Other than that their probably is not that much interesting that occurred.

The writer spoke with parents, their kids, and people who volunteered there. A theme throuhgout them all was the weather, it was very warm. It then finishes by giving the background on the even which, actually, is relatively extensive and slightly interesting. I also gives facts and date about past events, as well as expectations for this particular year. It closes with the hours and days of the event.

October 7, 2007

Cross Burning Update

The case of the man who burned a cross on his lawn in order to get sympathy and donations has had another follow-up written about it focused on the fact that hoaxes undermine real racial issues.

The original article leads with a description of waking up to the cross burning (by the guy who did it). The follow-up starts out similarly with another member of the family looking out and seeing the patch of ground where it happened. It then summarizes the main news story in three paragraphs before going into the analysis by civil rights activists and neighbors.It advances the news by giving new information on the families reactions and documenting the legal repercussions. It closes with the point of the article, that these incidents distract from real incidents.

September 29, 2007

Critical Mass Redux- structure

God damn it. This stupid blog just erased my posting. This means that I am only going to cover the Star and Tribune article this time. It has better pictures anyway.

This blog I want to look at where the writers puts the information, order of importance.

The story was written by Randy Furst, who, I know for a fact, does not drink caffeinated coffee.

Lead- Hard news with a general overview of the ride followed by a recap of last months arrests.

-starts with a police quote that shows us the ride went smoothly
- Explains one reason why (cam gordon)
- Uses a quote to show the size of the ride rather than just bare numbers
- Talks about the police presence
- Route of ride
- Commuter reactions and interactions
- Small conflict reported
- Short history of CC
- REcap of last months ride

Obviously the news story here is the lack of conflict, if there hadn't been arrests at last months Mass than this wouldn't have been news. Randy goes first into the lack of conflict, then to WHY there's a lack of conflict. He then covers potential reasons for conflict. All in all it's an awesome organization for the piece that makes perfect sense and doesn't sensationalize (it could have focused on the small confrontation between a biker and motorist that was reported to police). He also could have used the tension that still existed represented that their was still such a big police escort, to use that as the theme of the story. That, however, would have been a little sensational.

September 22, 2007

Attribution in Bluetongue

The Guardian Unlimited

There's a new disease infecting cattle in England called Blue tongue. It's been spreading across Europe since last summer and affects mortality rates, immune systems, and milk yields. It was discovered on one farm near Ipswich that has since been quarantined.

Because this is a breaking news story, sources are mostly from people. They are spread through out the story. In all, 10 sources are cited. Of these, eight are direct or partial quotes are two are paraphrased.

The reporter starts by paraphrasing, introducing the general situation and issues involved. They move into quotes as the complexity of the situation increases, letting the experts or people with vested interest speak for themselves. At least three times they put the attribution followed by colons and the quote. We've talked about this in class as an awkward construction but it doesn't seem to interfere with us understanding here. Also, the quotes tend to be rather lengthy, more than a sentence. Maybe it's just that British people are more well spoken than Americans but it makes me wonder what their policy is as far as ellipsis.

I think this works out quite well. Even if they had the quote, it made more sense for the reporters to paraphrase when it boil down a complex issue and help the readers understand better. The organization of the piece, however, is a little more confusing. Obviously it's a complicated issue but it might be better to get all of the concrete news about quarantine out of the way before bringing in all the background and reactions.

September 17, 2007

Blog on Leads

The article I’ve chosen to analyze leads is from the Sunday issue of the Star Tribune. It was written by Kara McGuire and is headlined, “Housing slump has builders primed to make a deal.�

The lead itself reads: �As the housing slump worsens, home builders are resorting to tactics typically reserved for Labor Day furniture sales and year-end auto blitzes.� The article goes on to describe the problems that builders have in the current housing market and the methods they are using to try to overcome it.

The lead itself is interesting; It uses ideas that are appealing and that create enough interest to make the reader want to know more. It’s also fun and not purely factual.

This lead brings up all the relevant information in the first sentence, which is: there is a housing slump putting home builders in a weird place, they use special tactics to overcome this.

I think the reader chose this lead because the subject itself is relatively boring, there was no numbers quotes or statistics that needed to be included in the lead. It organizes what could have been a relatively dry article into one that is halfway engaging.