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Stationary Bike Race to Raise Money for Cerebral Palsy

The 2007 Great Minnesota Stationary Bike Race is set to occur on March 10 at the St. Paul River Centre.

Serving as a fundraiser for United Cerebral Palsy of Minn., organizers of the race hope to raise $50,000, the Pioneer Press said.

This event detail wasn't written like an actual story. It was more a huge paragraph brimming with details about where, when, and what was going on. I found it a little bit hard to read, as all the facts kind of hit you in the face one after another. It would have been nicer if the article was written in the usual style and perhaps with quotes or more history on the race itself to break up details about the event.

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