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Story Structure

1,400 cars towed over the weekend
I think the reporter did an ok job on this story. It was very short and needed to be concise. The reporter had a concise lead. The next paragraph talked about the not having numbers for St. Paul and also reporting that t he snow emergency was continuing until 8 p.m. today. The following paragraphs detailed the parking regulations for snow emergencies and instructed readers how they should park.

I think the story could have been done in a more exciting way. It seemed very bland and could have befitted from a good personal story or quote. The order made sense and told the important information the reader needed to know.