the file below is a version i went through and edited. i think it is a good idea for you (bob) to go through it again as well!
dave, is there any way that you can split the flow chart into two pages in inspiration... that might help. If not i will see what it looks like when i print it out an go from there.
Everything looks good except the flowchart. It looks sort of distorted on the word page for the final paper. Is there anything I can do to make it better?
Should we maybe no stretch it out so much?
jen, do you want to go through the paper...make the changes and save a new one for us? It would be good to have at least two eyes on it. i will look to update it and proofread it again once i see a new one saved out there.
I checked the final paper and Good job using the quote! Other than that we have the order down!!! So it all looks fine to me!!!
The paper seems fine in content...however, i started documenting errors and am coming up with too many to try and explain. There are several spelling, capitalization, punctuation, etc. errors...
For example, in the demographic section, it says "quality for lunch" instead of qualify...things the computer wouldn't catch.
Also, the general grammer in the descriptions we copied from the website is pretty bad...and poorly worded.
The paper really needs to be looked at pretty carefully...
I'm fine with the presentation order.
The presentation looks great. I noticed one small typo on the Big Questions slide...How do you make (not "making").
I am fine with the order of presentation if everyone else is...
here is the presentation. let me know your thought and i will update it. i will come with four printouts of it as well so we can make notes on it to decide what we will say and know what slide comes next. Here is what i was thinking...let me know if there are any objections:
Charles Slides 1-6
Jen Slides 7-13
Bob Slides 14-18
Dave 19- Finish (This will probably be the longest walking them throught the flowchart, concept map and test- i will take the flowchart if you want to pass some of it off).
what do you guys think about that???
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lets all review this final edition of the paper and write our thoughts on the blog rather than try to update it- i will be the one who updates it according to what you guys tell me to do her on the blog.
Note- the only thing that needs to be put on this paper is the test and the performance objective which are both done. I will include when i print out tommorrow.
i am wrapping everything up right now and making it look pretty. i will post both the paper and presentation as soon as i am done so we can get feedback. i should have everything i need to put it all together by 9ish.
bob
i am wrapping everything up right now and making it look pretty. i will post both the paper and presentation as soon as i am done so we can get feedback. i should have everything i need to put it all together by 9ish.
bob
I looked at the Flowchart for awhile but still could not figure out how to change it to fit the test. The flow chart progresses through all of the concepts and knowledge needed for the test and has the test as a component for the assessment but I really did not change it much. We can talk about this later tonight.

Download file
here is the test!