You Go Back, Jack, Do It Again...
I had my magazine spread assy THROUGH The Past KNOWINGLY quick-critiqued today. I got a lot of good input. Basically, I've worked tooo big and need to make a lot of the items smaller. I've taken the text down from 12 point to 10 and you wouldn't believe how much space this has created!! I might even be able to cut pages 5 and 6 out of the project. I also got some advice about color choice and removing the clutter. I've started with the de-clutter and am working on making a surround for the quotes. It'll be a drastic redesign for the story pages, but it will be awesome once it is done. I'm already quite pleased with the title peice and am anxious to see it all completed.