September 22, 2005
things they carried vs mean girls
between The things they carried and mean girls, i thought The Things they Carried was a better piece. One reason why i thought it was better is because it makes more sense than the other one. Mean girls jumps around from place to place and I felt like I didn't know what was going on half the time. Although the things they carried wasn't perfect, it was a lot easier to read and follow. There also weren't as many grammatical errors in it. So in the end, even though neither of them were really that good, I thought The Things They Carried was better than Mean Girls.
at September 22, 2005 4:21 PM
I agree completely, I felt that "The Things We Carry" was a better piece. It had better content, it was more organized, and I enjoyed the style better. Mean Girls felt like it was just a bunch of rambling, but I still enjoyed reading it.
I totally agree with you about this one, the mean girls really not organization and tend to change the sizes of paragraph.
The Things We Carry have great transition and i could follow the story and understanding the essay really well.
I agree completely. "The Things We Carry" was a much better piece. I also felt that "Mean Girls' was very unorganized. Good job