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Emily project 2 rough draft reviews

For the peer rough draft reviews, I received a lot of positive feedback. A few alterations with the timing and transformation between scenes was advised, but for the most part it was enjoyed. I showed the original scene after I showed them my recreation, and this helped in allowing for a more critical feedback from them. Most of all, the acting and personification of the characters in the scene was pointed out as very successful. Also, the music being played in the background to set the mood really acted as a wonderful aide in connecting the viewer to the emotional value of the scene I had created.

As for my impression of the works which I reviewed, I felt that there could have been a little bit more refined scene comparison and interaction. Meaning, the works were not totally finished to the point where I could really understand what type of emotion was supposed to be captured.