Analysis: Comparing

The lead in the newly updated version on Randy Moss' return was a more in-depth coverage and had a little more "pizazz" in it then the first, lead, which was much more straight-forward and bland. The first lead only told us the straight, hard news and the second lead talked about who specifically made the deal and made the lead much more interesting without taking the important facts away. The second story is a response to a report from a competing news organization considering this story was the hot topic of the week and they wanted to grab the reader's attention as quickly as possible by having as much information as possible. While reading further, you see much more stats, even some information that was not as pertinent, but seemed to be added just to have more information in the first story, was taken out and only important quotations remain in the story.

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