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Posted by Miranda Edel on March 27, 2007 3:56 PM | Permalink
The last design has been done again and again. Exxon, GM, Westing House Electric. It really looks like a GM logo.
Your best start is to work with the middle one, but what are those circles? what do they represent? I like how they are used in the design but what are they. And make all three visible, take away that cone.
March 28, 2007 8:27 PM
The first two have a lot of potential. The first is very interesting - as you are playing with line creating form and space. The second has potential for the same reasons - the forms play with foreground and background while also creating negative space. The "visa" shape, however, is distracting.
March 28, 2007 9:49 PM
The first sketch works well personality. The negative space gives an interesting look and the outline is like a brush stroke. It sees enough that the viewers can read what it is. "JB".
April 3, 2007 12:55 PM