Evan's Newspaper

This is one of my drafts. I have made some changes since this version. Please let me know if you have any feedback before class. Thx

This is one of my drafts. I have made some changes since this version. Please let me know if you have any feedback before class. Thx
Comments and suggestions please.
Comments before class? The text on the right side is a feeding chart and an ingredients list. It will be readable when printed. Also, keep in mind that the final product that will go on the shelf will be much larger, so readability should'nt be an issue. The food will come out of a metal pour spout (the white box).

I need some feedback so I can get a better idea of what to fix. thx.

I really need some feedback so I can decide what direction to take with this...thx.

Any comments b4 tonight's class?
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