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Ron's Midas Ad Fixed...?


Any opinions?


Better. I still think there is too much. Too Much. What would it look like with just one coupon?

I think you should place the girl on the left side of the page because she is facing towards the right and when I see her my eyes follower her implied direction and go off the page without looking at the rest of the ad. If she were on the right her clip board would direct you into the ad.