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Posted by Ron Johnson Jr on October 12, 2007 11:40 AM | Permalink
Better. I still think there is too much. Too Much. What would it look like with just one coupon?
October 14, 2007 10:06 PM
I think you should place the girl on the left side of the page because she is facing towards the right and when I see her my eyes follower her implied direction and go off the page without looking at the rest of the ad. If she were on the right her clip board would direct you into the ad.
Tara Marklevits |
October 16, 2007 2:26 PM