hey everyone how are yall ive been writing poems lately and i was wondering wat you guys think of this one
How long have i known u?
Can i trust u?
How do i know?
The people i call my guys know me for years
My guys know my fears
My guys saw my tears that last playoff game
My guys know my nickname
In trouble my guys would never use my name
My guys knew me when i was poor
For my guys id go to war
My guys dont just follow they lead
For my guys id bleed
Id give my guys the world
And my guys would never disrespect my gurl
And if u gotta ask y
Then are u really my guy??
im just wondering how this is any feed back would be good
I really like that. It rhymes real well and has a lot of meaning in it. I can call me your guy, but the fact that I don't know you much doesn't really matter (: We're still good friends for the Rhet 1101 section 8
Posted by: Olzhas Toleu at November 12, 2004 10:21 AMWay to go Willie ! Nice poem !!
Posted by: Alia at November 12, 2004 06:18 PMBig Willie!!
I think that was a great poem! Have you been writing them for long? I enjoy writing poems too, except for some reason they HAVE to rhyme. I guess i just remember so many poems from when I was a kid and they all rhymed.
I think your poem says a lot about you and your friends. Your friends (guys) mean something to you. I think poems are a great way to express emotions. I really admire a man that honors his friendship with his guy friends. I like how you say your feelings about them and their feelings about you.
Keep writing!!
What Palm Tree is saying is true..the poem says a lot about you and your friends...My best friend llooovveeesss to write poems..and I guess your poem kinda reminded me of her...I think if you write poetry, you should post some more of your work on the blog, that way we can enjoy reading them and everyone can give you some feedback! CoOl!
Posted by: Alia at November 12, 2004 11:27 PM