Near-Final Copy: What does the anonymous think?

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This is my near-completed version of the poster. This will be 16x16, pasting two 11x17" sheets together carefully. In a book, this would be a two-page spread with one column of text on either side. The colors came out a little kooky in this JPEG, but you can get the general idea.

What do you think?

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Well I think it turned out very good! just make sure when you go to print it that the purple at the wrists dosnt show past the black. I liked the black and white version too because it gave almost this blueprint feel but this works well too. How did you use color choice for each section?

Very cool. Like your type choices. Your design seems both simple and complex.

I think this works very well. I get the information you're trying to provide except for I'm a little confused about physical activity with technology...do you mean like running with your ipod or something?

i love this!
concept is awesome, its so true for all of us in this generation! I like your key and that the bars are not straight, they look like fingers themselves.
very,very well done, you really kept me interested and looking at this for a long time!

Looks pretty good, it takes me awhile to for me to make out exactly whats trying to be displayed, which I think is good and bad. Your illustrations do a great job to capturing attention but are also a bit ambiguous. Mostly due because the graphs beside them aren't finished yet but I think those will help to clear that up. Otherwise nicely done.

I think this is clever. Very nice imagery! are the little graphs next to each hand meant to be another graph of the colors for each hand? It's defiantly a nice visual, but is it needed?

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