Structure: Romney wins chance to reset status

| 1 Comment

I felt that this article was structured very well. The lead only talks about Mitt Romney and his win in Maine this past Saturday. It also mentioned that it was a significant victory for him and his campaign.

Then in the second paragraph, it brings up Ron Paul and how he had tried very hard to rally in Maine. This brings to light the significance of Maine and shows Romney's upperhand in Maine compared to Paul.

The third paragraph then tells me the exact numbers of the caucus.

As you go through this relatively wordy and fact-packed article about Romney's win, it gives you more and more details about why this win is significant to his campaign and the competition between Romney and Paul.

This article gives me the whole picture of what is going in chunks of facts and analysis of the situation. It is clear and not confusing at all.

The link to the article is here.

1 Comment

Keep up the work, Michelle. Good job. G.G.

Leave a comment

About this Entry

This page contains a single entry by shamx007 published on February 12, 2012 11:36 PM.

Gov. Mark Dayton on social equity was the previous entry in this blog.

Minnesota Supreme Court hears Tatro v. University of Minnesota is the next entry in this blog.

Find recent content on the main index or look in the archives to find all content.


Powered by Movable Type 4.31-en