November 4, 2005
Hairston, James. "Urban Storm Water Runoff" Agriculture and Home Economics. June 30, 1914
at November 4, 2005 11:19 AM
This article is about urban storm water runoff. The article explains what urban storm water runoff is and where it comes from. It explains how the water is effecting the enviroment and why the water is becoming polluted. It goes over how the water is being polluted with excess nitrogen and phosphrous.
try to reword the beginning about the article. also put in the credentials of the author in it. if the piece is short then its a good length, but if its long then make it a little longer.
Your annotation is pretty good, however I recommend rewording the description. You used the word 'explain' quite a bit, and try to define what 'it' is.
-try to use the word water less because u use it a lot
-and find another way of saying 'goes over'
-u need to add in something about the author if there is anything
-u need to state y this source is important to ur final research paper