September 10, 2004

My friends journal entry.

While waiting for class to start I decided to check out my friends public journal site, and he had entered a short story he had written. The story was simple dialouge between a man who thought he was dreaming and a talking fish that was 'in his head'. I thought the entry was comedic and creative, however i found the use of profanity a little excessive. Who cares about an f-bomb here and there, but really I dont think its necessary to be in every other sentence. It was really funny though (especially the end), so with his permission maybe I'll post a link to the site where it is entered.

Posted by knol0041 at September 10, 2004 11:22 AM