Overall the article was well written as far a gramatical erors, and punctuation. The thesis was well stated in the first paragraph of the article, " Women are getting breast implants in record numbers, despite the negative publicity the surgery recieved in recent years." Dow Coming Corp was was sued for performing surgery that hurt 170,000 women. Cylicone implants have had a recent history of causing damage to users. The article briefly summarized some issues with the surgery, and explained that women will still use this surgery to achieve "beauty." The point of this artilce is to inform women the cost of such surgery. It is something that many women are doing and will continue to do, but is it worth it? The article briefly disscusses the risks of such surgery. This perticular article should have had more information about the diseases. In the second paragraph certain diseases were mentioned, but not described. As a non medical reader, lack of discription results in lack of informed knowlege.
Posted by lith0004 at October 8, 2004 11:26 AM