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March 13, 2009

Public Editor

Comments on the 3/11/09 issue of the UMD Statesman

Chris Julin is back in the Public Editor chair this week.

It's a somewhat diminutive issue this week, as we head into spring break – 24 pages – but there was a lot that I enjoyed reading. I think there was more real news in the news section than I've read in some entire 32-page editions of the Statesman. On the front page, the four refers include two hard news stories, a big sports story, and a nice enterprise feature. That's a good mix.


The budget
I'm glad to see the budget getting attention in the paper. It's difficult to report on because no one seems to know what's actually going to happen. There aren't many details available yet. But the paper offers several intriguing takes on UMD's budget woes this week.

Eric Ludy's story about department "clustering" in CLA is well done. It takes a tale of bureaucratic reshuffling and applies it to students. It gives us a peek at some of the human consequences of a difficult administrative decision. Students might ask, How's this going to affect us? Eric finds some students who have ideas about that.

I'm interested in the choice to focus only on Women's Studies. At least half a dozen departments in CLA will be affected by the clustering strategy.

We also get a nice story from Jolissa Doornink about the chancellor's proposal to save $250,000 by conserving energy at UMD. I'm willing to bet that the Statesman could offer at least one story about the budget crisis – and its real-world effects – in every issue for the rest of this semester. It's a genuine service to readers when you give them digestible stories about a huge issue that seems overwhelming and impossible to comprehend.


Favorite lead
Ben Johnson used this lead to open his story about the new policy limiting beer sales to club rooms and expensive suites at UMD hockey games:

Those who would enjoy a cold beer while watching a game at the new DECC in 2010 better get their wallets out.

It seems to me that everyone needs to pull out their wallets for beer unless the beer is free, but still, this lead is clever and it pulls me in. And in the next paragraph Ben lays out the new policy plainly. Very effective.

I have to say this about the leads in general. They're so much better than they were earlier in the year. The Statesman staff has done a swell job. The Public Editor has made a stink about leads several times this school year, and it's fair to note that there's been a big improvement. They're not all award winners, of course, but the paper has moved beyond the dreaded topic lead: Thursday night 200 people gathered at a meeting in Bohannon Hall to talk about trees.


Quote of the week
Brianna Dehnke delivers this wonderfully concise and colorful quote from Jane Dolter, who works with the University for Seniors program:

"Don't be afraid of old people," she said.


Like the briefs
The campus news briefs are a great touch. There's so much going on at a school the size of UMD, and not all happenings merit 800 words. A paragraph will often do. A column of briefs allows the paper to keep readers alerted to a broad range of news with minimal space and effort.

Superficially – but significantly – it makes the paper appear on top of things. Substantially, it gives readers a heads-up about some of what's going on at this big and busy place. I don't propose reducing the Statesman to one-paragraph new coverage, but I do think the paper could fill an entire page with briefs each week if the lay out was clear and easy to read.

Have a safe and refreshing spring break.

-Chris Julin

March 4, 2009

Public Editor

Comments on the 3/4/09 issue of the UMD Statesman

This week we welcome Maija Morton, the program director at KUMD.

I rather enjoyed the paper, felt like the news was relevant and full with not a lot of fluff as is true sometimes. I really enjoyed the obituary story about Bill Holm, very nice.


Front Page
This week's front page hits important, current and local stories but seems a bit jumbled in the design. A pull quote on top of a front-page picture is an unusual choice. My eye would be pulled into the story if the layout went top to bottom: headline, photo, subhead then a bit of the story, then continued on page two. Her quote may have worked best in the caption?

There are too many fonts and type sizes used in the front-page headlines. Soulja Boy Story is a big one and has a smaller headline. Also the Sports teaser at the top is too small and complex. Bolder, clearer and well-delineated teasers can help. And with the website tagline matching the picture, it seems connected to the lead story.

The Statesman website may be as a bold simple tagline to the papers name. Also on the top of every page, I think it could be bolded and a bit bigger.


Stories
The stories were interesting, varied and held my interest, particularly the culture stories like the one about local filmmakers, the tattoo culture, the BWCA Camping story, etc.

I thought the Sports stories were nice. Good newsy leads. The news leads were not so good. The UMD Students at the Capitol was more of a feature lead and the budget also was complex sentence structure for a grabby lead. Best to start with what the story is really about. Boil it down. Make every word count. If a reader doesn't make it past the lead, they should know what the story is about.

Some stories could use a second set of eyes, few copy editing mistakes but news story leads could be stronger as could story organization and length. The Psytrance story was a bit long. I felt like I got the whole story about half way through.

The Soulja Boy story suffered from some confusion of the arguments being put forth. The underlying theme (near the end of the story) to me seems like the lead. Isn't the reason for the protest have less to do with hip-hop and much more to do with this artist in specific?

The Grad Fair story might have been better in the Campus Briefs? It was not much more than a press release story.

Lots of nice relevant ads. (Except for the liquor ads.) Good work!

-Maija Morton