The story I chose to analyze is from WCCO. http://wcco.com/crime/police.deadly.shooting.2.1524895.html
The Lead: Minneapolis police are investigating a deadly shooting that happened outside of a party Friday night.
-This lead does not do the story justice. It does not get to the action, it focuses more on the investigation than on what specifically happened. It was not just a deadly shooting, a 17-year-old girl in-fact died after being shot in the neck. That detrimental piece of information was not included in the piece until the third paragraph, while it should have been in the lead.