Prompt 9: Final Project Critique 2
A second group in my section presented on the Environmental Sustainability goal. I was largely unimpressed with this group's presentation. The Millennium Development Goals are explicitly about helping the advancement of the developing world, yet this project seemed to focus almost exclusively on methods which were entirely irrelevant to that market. I guess they must have interpreted the project differently than we did, but it doesn't make a lot of sense to me to present on the MDGs with solutions which are totally inappropriate to the nation's the UN's project os focused on. I can understand focusing locally as an analogy for what can be done in the developing world, but when the proposed solutions are energy efficient light-bulbs and digital thermometers and bio-gas, there's really nothing meaningful that applies to the developing world to be extracted.
This group briefly addressed the developing world directly, namely by stating that it is necessary to change individual's mindsets, and government/societal values will follow. However, I think that a more in depth address of the specific problem of pollution in the developing world was called for, particularly as it is the largest source of pollution in the world. Even the tactics they proposed for the first-world were not effective at actually eliminating environmental damage — almost all of the methods they addressed were simply ways of reducing electricity usage, which does not address the fact that the electricity used is still coming mostly from environmentally unsound and heavily-polluting sources. The only means of actually reducing dependence on un-renewable resources they addressed was bio-gas, which they openly acknowledged is not actually a sustainable technology. The one point of their presentation which most struck me was the fact that 30 million ink cartridges are disposed each year. This is an example of corporation's pure greed leading to massive environmental harm — there is no need for even one ink cartridge to be exposed, except that printer manufacturers refuse to make printers which can be re-filled without buying a new cartridge, and they specifically design the cartridges to be short-lived, as well as technically complicated to justify the exorbitant prices they pay. This seemed like a clear situation where concrete progress towards reducing environmental harm is possible, yet this group did not even address the complex and despicable reality behind this statistic. I hate to be harsh but I was not impressed.
