Free entertainment for holiday fun

This is a feature story published right before thanksgiving holidays on Star Tribune.

 

It is a consumer guide feature that provides advises of free interesting holiday activities for people live in the metro area.

 

The feature properly uses a short-form structure, dividing the optional activities into separate units with subtitles. This is pretty easy to read and satisfies the audiences' short attention spans.

 

Also, it provides timely and effective information with tight writing for the audience.

 

While giving useful information in each unit, I do think that it is necessary to add some more details about the activities.

 

Another thing I think is not good is that the design and layout of the feature is really boring. It would be much better to attach pictures and patterns around each unit to make it more attractive and unique.

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