After reading Danielle Williams essay, I found good and bad points to it. What I liked most about her essay was that it was very easy to read even though she went in depth with her experience in her IB English 1 class. She went into specific tasks within the class that ultimately strenthened her writing and reading abilities.
I guess the only thing that I didn't like about the essay was that it wasn't very interesting to read. Even though she explained her experience very well, it didn't seem to keep my attention. The only other spots where I saw some problems were small gramatical errors within the writing. Otherwise, I thought Danielle's essay was quite good.