My critique was great, i found it helpful. The word "prop" was something i had never thought of, yet something clicked during its use. I also found Laura, Jasmine, Lindsay's critique very informative. For me what makes a good critique is when i can also gain information about myself through someone else and their work.
What was said seemed relevant and thoughtful. Our time slots were a bit short, although i still feel like i gained something.
I'm very excited to see everyones work now and in the near future.
jason (damn cat just scratched)